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Wednesday, March 27, 2013

New Fan Fiction Idea #5

Working Title: The Loony Bin

Fandom: Hetalia: Axis Powers

Genre Tags: Drama/Angst

Length: Multichapter, at least one for each patient.

Protagonist: Alicia, a university freshman of average build with dark hair in a low ponytail. She's an introvert who enjoys solitude as much as hanging out with her friends, she takes schoolwork seriously, and she's very easily affected by "the evils of the world," as it were.

Other Main Characters: Alfred, the bulimic patient. Sophomore-age university student who's quite cheerful unless the situation has anything to do with food or he thinks someone is calling him fat. This would be an absurd thing for someone to call him, of course, although I'm still debating whether he should be a "classic" bulimic or one that "purges" through obsessive exercise. Either way, he had a great American football scholarship before his situation got bad.
Ludwig, the obsessive-compulsive patient. Mid-twenties, he usually refuses to leave his room, nor does he often let others in. He is friends with Feliciano, when he's Feliciano. He has a good heart, but his situation makes it difficult for him to do much for others.
Feliciano/Romano, the dissociative identity patient. Feliciano is very cheerful and a bit passive, while Romano is intolerably uncooperative and hateful. Generally, he switches his hair part when transitioning between identities. He would probably be able to function decently in society if he didn't have such terrible memory issues.
Arthur, the major depressive patient. The officials at the asylum have gone to... rather extreme measures to prevent him from killing himself. He rarely interacts with others; on those occasions, he does so acrimoniously. He very rarely shows a glimpse of any positive emotion.
Raivis, the paranoid schizophrenic patient. He will interact with others if they're nice enough, though not without harbouring suspicions. He will, however, push all others away when he has hallucinations of his torturer, and, if he thinks they are his torturer, he may do so violently. He's normally very quiet but can be cheerful.
Ivan, the antisocial patient. He's very excited to interact with others but rarely has the opportunity as he always tries to maim them somehow. He is not allowed anywhere near Raivis no matter his mood.
Francis, the narcissistic patient. As he manages to hit on Alicia enough within a few seconds for her to flee, he doesn't get much screen time. He's really quite pleasant normally, but if he decides someone is attractive enough and they don't reciprocate, he gets violent. He also doesn't take affronts to his appearance or cooking, but rarely do those crop up.
Kiku, the schizophrenic patient. He doesn't talk much, nor does he express emotion. In his world, he is vanquishing evil spirits. He does so with an authentic katana that somehow has not been taken from him.
Eduard, the manager of the asylum. He's very calm and a bit numb to the chaos. He just does his best to help the patients in what little ways he's able.

Antagonist: Sometimes the patients, sometimes Eduard when he doesn't have quite the right idea as to what is most helpful for a patient. Otherwise, lack of funding is a huge setback.

Setting: A typical university city, though I'm not entirely sure where. The main factor is that this particular asylum is a private one, poorly-funded, and the only one in a convenient radius.

Plot: For a psychology project with few guidelines, Alicia decides to interview the staff of the little asylum/institute she stumbled across one day. She ends up trying to communicate with the patients as well and forming some bonds. But there are some things seriously wrong with this place, and she has to decide if she can handle taking it upon herself to change them.

Point of View: Third-person, omniscient.

I got this idea some time ago, but I doubt I would be willing to do the research involved. All of my knowledge is from my one term of general psychology, which doesn't bode well for a dark disorder-oriented fiction. Although I could always look up things on Wikipedia. [is killed by every teacher ever]

Also, I like the discord between the title and the actual fiction, but I'm not sure if it would really work that well.

2 comments:

  1. I'd really like to see this one; it sounds intense and ... strangely uplifting? If it has a happy ending, at least. I was expecting a plot more like Shutter Island, where they all get lobotomized at the end or something, but if Alicia's trying to help them, it sounds like it might turn out better.

    You matched each Hetalia patient to their personality quite well, meaning that I wanted to sob and cry out each time I saw what one was afflicted with. Raivis, why???? And Arthur, ohgoshno. And Feliciano/Romano being the same person, implying that one of them doesn't really exist ... D: This being said, it might not be so great of an idea for me to read this, but I never get tired of torturing myself with your FanFictions.

    Also, Alicia sounds very much like me.

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    1. Not sure about the ending. It'd probably be on the happy side, though not overtly so.

      Hehe, well, since it's at least not in first-person for any patients, I'd hope it wouldn't be too hard on you.

      Yeah, I guess so!

      I'm definitely still debating whether or not I would do this (and if I would rather focus in more on some of the patients), but it could be an interesting experiment.

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